It's Microfiction Monday over at stony river. We are invited to write a short, short story of 140 characters or less (including spacing and punctuation) based on the above picture.
Dancing awake in the sun's path, her angel girl would create moments of wonder with each step. Her mama held Nature’s fellowship that day.
Happy Monday everyone!
44 comments:
How sweet! It made me think of the little girl as an adorable pixie. Great MM. ;)
Great thoughts. I would just love to take a long walk on a path as serene as that ...
I think you captured what that girl must be thinking/feeling.
Sooo sweet.
-Jo
-LazyonLoblolly
Happy Monday to you also! ~ enjoyed my read on your great take ~ lovely words ~ *heartsmiles* Lib
Just like the photo, your story is full of love and wonderment. Nice, gentle stuff. :)
Have you ever submitted anything to
http://www.onefortyfiction.com/
You'd be very good at it!
Judy (South Africa)
I'm fascinated by the different perspections this picture provided. I liked yours VERY much.
A delightful, beautiful way to look at the photo. I love it.
-- Kay
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Very sweet. Love your fall colors on here, too! :)
When I think of mine and yours they could not be any further away from each other. I really appreciate this writing exercise and all the variations. Beautiful poetry you've made. :O)
You capture this very well. I'd love to wander this beautiful spot.
beautiful words for a beautiful picture
Wonderful story! You've captured the essence of childhood innocence and joy being outside in nature.
gorgeous.
i love this idea. must steal it.
Very nice MF. It brought me back to the hikes we used to take with our children when they were young, traipsing through the woods for the sheer joy of it. Thanks!
Really beautiful Kelly. Hope you had a good weekend (meaning had at least a few moments to your self:).
perfect! this MM will go down as one of my favorites.
Beautiful, just beautiful. The photo really makes me feel like fall is really here - as if the wind and chilly temperatures did not already.
This is beautiful Kelly...you have such a gift with words.
You capture the beauty of the picture perfectly.
Have a great week.
There is such beauty in a child's dance and you captured it so well.
Lovely Kelly. You draw the reader in with those few words and leave them enthralled with the wonder of Nature!
You always manage to come up with something spot on. Loved this. :)
Lovely autumn walk!
Here's mine: http://strummedwords.blogspot.com/2010/11/microfiction-monday-tease.html
As a fellow mom to a little girl (x2), I love where you went with this. Very sweet.
Who said miracles had to be spectacular? Nice one!
did my first microfiction monday. thanks for turning me onto this!
Beautifully stated relationship of "angel girl" and her "mama" in such contrast to mine.
:)
Nature walks - beautiful!
Kelly, you make every word count, and each sounds so beautiful! I think this picture spoke directly to the mothers in the group-don't you think?
This is beautiful :-)
Very sweet blog which made excellent reading.
Yvonne.
Beautiful interpretation of the picture. :)
There was no getting around it. Suzy would have to brave the lair of the leaf monster if she wanted to get home.
A slightly more macabre take on the photo. {*grin*}
What a beautiful tale of mother and child...inspirational and lovely writing.
And I'll bet you weren't thinking of Jillian at all when you wrote this, huh? :) Beautiful perspective.
That's lovely! I bet this is the type of thing that seems much easier than it really is. But you've succeeded beautifully!
Oh that is beautiful. I love days like that - and I only wish we had more of them! :)
i love that she's creating the moments of wonder.
Hi Kelly,
Those are some beautiful words, they tell the whole story, it doesn't leave you thinking that there is more to come. Great perspective
Yvonne
You did a beautiful job with this week's MM. I enjoyed it immensely.
Have a great week. Cheers.
While daughter creates wonders, the mother enjoys communion with nature. Most enjoyable.
Oh so many good ones and this was one of them
Very cool. ;)
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