Arthur Hacker - The Cloister of the BellHere's another Flash Fiction (55 words) inspired by a lovely painting.
The audience's hush hungered for the tenor’s embrace of the stage. Hidden in the chorus, Claire felt accelerated by each labored breath as she responded to David's call through song. Shelving a family’s pleas, Claire would follow him through the night. Her life was wrapped around David’s voice.
Thank you for reading. (I'm feeling better, hooray!)
21 comments:
Beautiful art and beautiful interpretation! I love your words, Kelly...
So much going on in so few words. Well done.
Lovely painting, lovely words.
(And glad you're feeling better)
Judy (South Africa)
Fascinating flash 55...you've woven such a lovely story succinctly.
Yeah - I always enjoy when you do these. I hope your weekend is going well.
So much said in such a few words,
Excellent.
A happy Christmas to you and your family.
Yvonne.
Enthralling interpretation!
Best wishes to you and your family for Christmas.
Your mind amazes me! Awesome.
Glad you're feeling better. ;)
I love that last line especially. So much in so few words.
Last two lines are fantastic. Love the image too :) :)
Take Care Kelly :) :)
Hugs :) :)
I'm so sorry you were under the weather. ECK. Glad you're feeling better.
The painting and the words are absolutely beautiful. Each and every line pulled me in, Kelly. :)
Words and painting go together, beautiful!
Glad you are feeling better!
Blessings!
I'm so glad you're feeling better!
I am in awe of your great abilities in poetry!
Beautiful piece and painting, Kelly.
Have the happiest Christmas ever!
Big hugs!
B xx
...The whole story,,there,,,
Interesting how you got from the picture to this, but oh can you see the longing in her face!
Great words with appreciate sentiments to a masterful work of art in its obvious glorified image of femininity in a pose that grows on your senses of respectability!
Merry to all of your followers, as in good cheer to adhear, as to be joyful is to be happy.
I like you all with the heat of the sun, the shine of the stars, and over the rainbow!
Thank you. Take wonderful and appreciate care. Lovelove, Andrew. Sky.
oh poor Claire, so entranced. does david care or even know of her?
Ooh-I like! Sounds like the makings of a really juicy love story Kelly, and one I wouldn't want to put down!
WOW! amazing writing to the picture. I totally feel her passion for her job of musician. LOVE IT.
It is amazing how I was able to see the picture through what you wrote! Loved it!
Very nice! Still hanging on for more... :)
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