It's Microfiction Monday over at stony river. We are invited to write a story based on a select picture in 140 characters or less (including punctuation and spacing).Fear instantly chilled his chest. Determination grabbed hold of his will to find his washed away love. His heart would survive the wave.
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I always enjoy your microfiction days!
So sad, but hope still lives. Wonderful.
Have a great week x
Love your Microfiction...
I believe he made it and found his love.
I also believe in faries!!! : )
Great take on the picture.
Love your blog, the paintings are beautiful on the right!
Beautiful, sad take on the pic of the day! Love it! Hope you have a wonderful week!
Sylvia
Wonderful one!
That's how my heart fills, it will survive the waves. Thanks for sharing. :O)
Sad, yes, but remarkable microfiction
Nothing better than a guy who won't give up on his girl.
The poor fellow--but at least his heart will go on...
Good take on the picture. Have a great week. Cheers!
Nice!
And best of luck with your hubby's job search. Bill looked for five months, but mine went on for a year and a half!
Love and determination will overcome all obstacles - apparently ;-)
Loving the microfiction!
Extremely Beautiful Micro Fiction :) :)
Nicely done - it really goes with the photo nicely but had the photo not been there I could have totally pictured this in my head.
Happy Labor Day - I know you don't get a break today as a mom hardly ever gets a break. In fact, I hear my little one stirring so I best get back to reality.
Oh, I like this positive ending. Love conquers all. Well done!
intense words.
love the sentiments in it.
Very sad but as long as there's hope.....
Lovely to read.
Thanks for your visits and comments perhaps I don't thank people enough but believe me each comment is precious and is greatly appreciated.
Yvonne.
Heartbreaking, but beautiful nonetheless. Hope you are having a great holiday today! :)
This is so beautiful and optimistic. I love it!
Wowza. That is one scary picture but you found a way to make it inspiring. Well done.
I love these... and here's hoping it isn't just his heart that survives the wave ;)
That was awesome. Did he find his love? :)
What if he has to die to keep his heart frm being forever broken?
One would think it was almost Jack and Rose.
In Princess Bride Wesley said it == nothing can stop true love, not even death...
I think this is your strongest microfiction post yet...you certainly nailed the image and the emotions. Nicely written.
Very romantic and dramatic! :O)
Kelly, you are a true romantic!
Such a romantic!!!
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