Ooohh, come back and finish it... I like this line... as waking sewed the possible... I need to read it out loud so I can truly feel the words!
Excellent, I love it. Thanks for sharing.Yvonne.
That's the line that really spoke to me, the same as Vicky noted ... As waking sewed the possible. Those few words say so much, bringing the act of sewing into the abstract possibilities of our lives. It's a great visual.
Will you finish this poem? Did the kids find the pasta?
I feel you. My spirit feels a little bit like the one in this poem.I hope your kids got the pasta they wanted and that you get to come back to the writing deck soon amid peace and quiet.
I've decided to keep the poem "as is." I like the potential for possibility kind of ending. Thanks everyone for your support of my quickfires!
I'm always amazed at your poetry quickfires. Nicely written. Love the creative side you bring.
You always amaze me with the words you use to describe whatever it is you happen to be writing about.How was the pasta?
Great imagery...So cool the gift you have. ;)
You have a talent for words and creating an imagery that I can see clearly in my mind! Beautiful!
may the blessing be always with you!! ........................................
YAY! Poetry quickfire day! I love your poetry quickfires. I always smile knowing I am going to be inspired by a lovely turn of phrase that will appear on your blog. Thank you for another amazing one! =)
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I'm amazed at all your poetry quickfire! I mean, I feel the juices flowing and get inspired from time to time, but you just have it in you all the time. Keep it up and keep on sharing :)
You constantly amaze me with what you manage to do in just a few stolen moments!
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I love the poem but it makes me sad b/c it makes me picture you sad, hunched over your computer typing those English stories/poems and dealing with the kids with no time to yourself! I hope you get to relax and have some fun this weekend. Happy Mother's day to you Kelly!
You have style.
I enjoy your quick fires. Never stop doing them even if you have to carve out 5 minutes while sitting on the toilet. I'm always amazed by those creative bursts. I love the title Patching the Now.HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY!!! (for tomorrow) Please enjoy your day. Make hubby and kids treat you like the queen that you are :)
Hey girlie! These are ALWAYS amazing! You are so very talented. Thanks for your continued love and support with your visits and comments. I truly, truly appreciate it. I hope and pray that you will have a great weekend and an even more wonderful Mother's Day! You deserve it!Blessings,Teresa <><♥ Too Many Heartbeats ♥
I loved "unraveled stitches mocked..." You have such a beautiful way with words, Kelly. Between the lyrical words and stunning art, I feel like I am on vacation whenever I visit.
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