two people sharing the usual space energy pushing through a screen circle talk finds no eureka one person sees the swallowing of dreams time will not wait for awakening a spouse will help the other through
This poem sounds personal and is very touching. I know you guys will pull through. I was thinking about meetup.com. They have various different groups. Maybe you can check it out.
I see a push n' pull in these words. I know my time is getting close where I will have to pack up my dreams and do something else! I'm fighting for you~xXx
Its a long road you've been traveling and your poem speaks volumes! I think of you often and hope that a path will still reveal itself clearly to you. Stay strong and keep fighting like a girl like I know you know how to do! hugs to you sweet friend!
Hmmm, personal? Like you're helping hubby through? I love it, Kel.
I must show you one I am writing when I'm ready. I have found that writing poetry, even crappy poetry, helps creativity. Or have I told you this before? Anyway, Happy Father's Day to your hubby.
I've been thinking so much about you Kel. It's a hard job to always be the one keeping things going, motivating the household. Hugs to you. I wish I could organize a helper and kidnap you for a day to enjoy some fun. Sending you big hugs and clear positive thoughts!
You know how they say the eyes are the window to the soul. Well, I think poetry could be added as another window into the soul. I can see deep meaning in this one.
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This poem sounds personal and is very touching. I know you guys will pull through. I was thinking about meetup.com. They have various different groups. Maybe you can check it out.
P.S. I'll keep you in my thoughts and prayers dear. Hoping for the best!!
I can tell this is you... Hang in there.
I see a push n' pull in these words.
I know my time is getting close where I will have to pack up my dreams and do something else! I'm fighting for you~xXx
Heavy lines...hang in there. A breakthrough will come from "somewhere."
a spouse will help the other through
That's the most valuable line, Kelly. Hugs from me.
That,,,was about as nice of a poem I think I have ever read,,,
Sounds personal. Thinking of you
Its a long road you've been traveling and your poem speaks volumes! I think of you often and hope that a path will still reveal itself clearly to you. Stay strong and keep fighting like a girl like I know you know how to do! hugs to you sweet friend!
The arrangement of two lives interweaving. How amazing is the growth of love and learning to abide is peace.
Thank you for sharing something so personal! Great job!
I'm glad you are getting some poetry therapy. Hang in there...like that kitty on that poster
And we all feel where that 'somewhere' is from. I'm rooting for you.
I feel for you guys. I know this must be so wearying and stressful. Hugs.
My favorite line: "Circle talk finds no eureka." Stunning encapsulation of a common human experience. Your poems are magic, Kelly.
I LOVE "energy pushes through a screen"!!!! What a visual! You are amazing!
I hope there is NO swallowing of dreams! You go girl!
Hmmm, personal? Like you're helping hubby through? I love it, Kel.
I must show you one I am writing when I'm ready. I have found that writing poetry, even crappy poetry, helps creativity. Or have I told you this before? Anyway, Happy Father's Day to your hubby.
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I've been thinking so much about you Kel. It's a hard job to always be the one keeping things going, motivating the household. Hugs to you. I wish I could organize a helper and kidnap you for a day to enjoy some fun. Sending you big hugs and clear positive thoughts!
Sorry for being late commenting, having problems with either pc or blogger,
I enjoyed this , made good reading.
Yvonne.
i really loved this one..
You know how they say the eyes are the window to the soul. Well, I think poetry could be added as another window into the soul. I can see deep meaning in this one.
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