It's Microfiction Monday over at stony river. We are invited to write a short story inspired by a select picture in just 140 characters (including spacing and punctuation).
As Rayna ascended, she gently caressed the softest of manes. Rayna breathed deeply as she left her maiden days behind. His hands held tight.
Enjoy your Monday!
41 comments:
Awesome. I love the statement - left her maiden days behind. Happy Monday - hope it's a good week for you.
Interesting how his hands held tight. It makes me think it's going to be quite an exciting journey!
So romantic and beginning a new chapter in her life. :O)
Love it! Wish you would write the rest...
Ooh, very romantic. I love it!!
Oooh that's just lovely!!
Off to wedded bliss! Nice take on the picture.
Love the "maiden days left behind"...
Romantic MM..
Thanks for visting mine
I just came from another blogger who posted on this picture - both of yours were such different feelings to them. BUT I want to say you both chose the name "Rayna" - intersting!
Lots of romance in the air this week. :)
Are his hands possessive or protective? Only time will tell, but I don't have a good feeling about this ...
Excellent, it's very cleverly done.
Yvonne.
Oh, I was breathless right up to the last little bit. I loved how you ended it... his hands held tight... awesome. I sat and looked at the pic for a minute and not a single thing came to mind. You rocked it!
ooo so romantic. Very well done :)
Excellent.. but now I want to read more!
An October wedding and honeymoon! Lovely thoughts. Great take on MM!
~Jean
Like the best MMs, this leaves one wanting more. I love the way you ended it: the hands holding tight could be either possessive or protective, as Quilly points out. Food for thought.
Have a great week.
Nicely done, it sounds as if things will be happy
awwwww... so romantic.
Ruthi
I love how you thought of such a unique and fitting name.
"His hands held tight" - makes me think she's in control. Love it!
oooh, a romance in the making!
Beautiful story...this is like the happy ending to a fairy tale. Lovely!!
Mmm. A little bit of romance for my heart to ponder this chilly Monday evening. Lovely, as usual, Kelly.
Hmm...Off into uncharted territory, eh? :)
Ooo. . .very romantic. Lucky her!
Excellent! I love the expression 'maiden days'.
Well- the horse or the man? both have mystical qualities...gratitude and recognition of beauty.
Love it! I think you should check out this author I just discovered. Kate Morton. Her two books The House at Riverton and the Hidden Garden were excellent and I'll bet you would love them. If you haven't read them let me know and I will send you the House at Riverton. I borrowed the other.
I wonder what the days ahead have in store for them. I'm sure they will be filled with much love and happiness. Love it.
Your mind amazes me...
Woww!!!! Soo Romantic!!!!!!!
Nice to write about them filled with hope! The picture made me think of Alladin, now I want to go watch it.
How romantic! ((big smiles))
Awh that's sweet. Beautifully implied. :O)
Ooo! Write the rest!! Did he rescue her? Steal her? What happened?!!
Beautifully written my dear.
Beautiful love story.
You did well with this picture Kelly. Soon as I saw it my mind drew a blank, so I was anxious to see if you rose to the challenge...
Aah, sigh, sigh! :)
I feel there's romance in the thin air today.
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Such a sweet and romantic story. Love it!
B xx
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