Tuesday, April 12, 2011

J is for Jolt

Well, bel, I did manage to do a poem for National Poetry Month and a post for the letter "J" today :) It may be a one timer for this month, but whew...I did it!!

Remember to visit my fellow poet, bel. She loves visitors too!!

Also, click on the A to Z challenge button on my sidebar to see all the "J" posts for today :)

Thanks for reading.

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Jolt...


What word fell off the tongue
that made you stop
to look -
to open -
to let
the unrehearsed reveal
in a pause
between the busy and obvious

Did the other's slip
of the vulnerable
force your human to jolt...

What flame driven word
burnt through a mask
to pierce -
to birth -
to phoenix
a hand holding that heart
in a pause
between the morn and night

21 comments:

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Thanks for a wonderful poem it was a good J word and a difficult one to write a poem about,

Yvonne.

T Rex Mom said...

Love that you combined poetry and A to Z challenge. Awesome.

Randi said...

Wowza! Your talents never cease to amaze. Loved the flow of the poem--good work, as always.

Munir said...

Very tender jolt !!

Judy Roney said...

I did not know about the A to Z challenge. This looks like fun. I like your choice of j words. I would not have thought of jolt to write about but you did it well. I love, "That flame driven word, burnt through a mask". I want to do that with my words! :)

Jenners said...

You are on fire with this a to z and the poetry! Well done!

littlekhargosh said...

how well u transformed J into a beauty! thanks for sharing :D

deep said...

Love the last stanza. Transcendental.

welcome to my world of poetry said...

Thanks for the visits and comments I do value them.

Yvonne.

Valerie said...

My J is for Jolly as in Jolly good. You excelled yourself with this one, Kelly.

N. R. Williams said...

I admire poets. I'm not very good at it.
Nancy
N. R. Williams, The Treasures of Carmelidrium.

Angela Felsted said...

I like how you reference the phoenix, a symbol of rebirth.

the wild magnolia said...

Spectacular!

This gives me something to shoot for!

I loved it!!

Robyn Campbell said...

You did two posts in one. You are GOOOD.

I love this, Kel, especially that last part. And the phoenix. I loved, loved, loved Jolt.

Louisiana Belle said...

Nicely written, Kelly. You have a gift for the written word. :)

Kim said...

I think that last stanza reflects you - your words are powerful yet loving. It's a combination very few people get right. Beautiful Kelly!

K said...

Jolt is a great J word. Love it.

The Write Girl said...

What depth in this poem. I had to read it a couple of times. You have such a way with words. Beautiful poet!!

Teresha@Marlie and Me said...

I'm jolted by this poem

Angela said...

Awesome Kelly! You are crusing right along with with these! Your creative mind is inspiring. :)

Gerri said...

oooh la la...I really like this one!!

Did the other's slip
of the vulnerable
force your human to jolt...

Man, I mean Woman, you're good!!