tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post5364155006246062736..comments2023-10-30T09:31:00.839-04:00Comments on My Voice, My View: Through the yearsseptembermomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-6354951981531080832009-04-17T22:39:00.000-04:002009-04-17T22:39:00.000-04:00I really like this! I don't think it needs much ed...I really like this! I don't think it needs much editing ... but hopefully there will be many many stanzas added! Love the concept of this poem!Jennershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08044537551139633301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-37403667558308961392009-04-17T09:26:00.000-04:002009-04-17T09:26:00.000-04:00Editing? What's editing?
I enjoyed this very much...Editing? What's editing?<br /><br />I enjoyed this very much. Espcially "Eight years of clay." And what's nice is that in another 15 or so year, you may have another stanza to add.belhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01247590943276439138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-52518245345515951182009-04-17T04:09:00.000-04:002009-04-17T04:09:00.000-04:00I like it! There's a whimsical nature here that ca...I like it! There's a whimsical nature here that calls out: rememberance and expectation. Very nice, septembermom.Judith Ellishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04593319882150923231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-28114294439414012272009-04-16T22:17:00.000-04:002009-04-16T22:17:00.000-04:00I can only hope that there are more stanzas yet to...I can only hope that there are more stanzas yet to write than you can possibly imagine. I enjoyed that one!Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07803503583347758969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-33828640056771811302009-04-16T20:27:00.000-04:002009-04-16T20:27:00.000-04:00I really like this one. What a way to reflect on y...I really like this one. What a way to reflect on your growth and motion through life. :)Gerrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15355005063119095095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-8901819661098555662009-04-16T19:02:00.000-04:002009-04-16T19:02:00.000-04:00Very nice! Loved it.
Oh and glad you're feeling b...Very nice! Loved it. <br />Oh and glad you're feeling better, sweetums!Luciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10200461709137056253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-45685545060556658962009-04-16T16:21:00.000-04:002009-04-16T16:21:00.000-04:00I like the structure, and I like where it goes. It...I like the structure, and I like where it goes. It's simple.. yet pretty complex in idea. Keep going!CDBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07693699262370727497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-56509896191896419052009-04-16T11:59:00.000-04:002009-04-16T11:59:00.000-04:00Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing your heart...Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing your heart with us. :)Sneaky Mommahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14867043535687784927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-17061032842491438352009-04-16T11:47:00.000-04:002009-04-16T11:47:00.000-04:00Great poem, a window into your life. I like the im...Great poem, a window into your life. I like the image of spinning around and becoming the next person, the next stage. Very nice.Joannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972054718663959694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-75439710728558660632009-04-16T11:21:00.000-04:002009-04-16T11:21:00.000-04:00Leave it as it is, it is perfect, and so true. Hop...Leave it as it is, it is perfect, and so true. Hope you are feeling better today and that things are once again good.<br /><br /><br /> Hugs GJ and Carol xx Angel Ginger Jasperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15332639287513279097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-32354882432408932952009-04-16T10:58:00.000-04:002009-04-16T10:58:00.000-04:00Oh what a great piece of poetry- and congrats at P...Oh what a great piece of poetry- and congrats at PPP too!Danihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05725881252851352861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-69976105430037779282009-04-16T10:50:00.000-04:002009-04-16T10:50:00.000-04:00Congratulations on your win on PPP! It reminded me...Congratulations on your win on PPP! It reminded me of how we protect that part of us that quietly buds until it's ready to burst into bloom.shabby girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03991126161405336712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-88684730766065882862009-04-16T10:44:00.000-04:002009-04-16T10:44:00.000-04:00Wow. You are so talented that it just amazes me! =...Wow. You are so talented that it just amazes me! =)Pennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16791257181990955117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-4499792728004436202009-04-16T10:19:00.000-04:002009-04-16T10:19:00.000-04:00I think its perfect how it is!I think its perfect how it is!kelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03040730267411361863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-65454592172483962222009-04-16T10:13:00.000-04:002009-04-16T10:13:00.000-04:00So wonderful - I love how clearly you describe the...So wonderful - I love how clearly you describe the stages of your life. Beautifully done. :)Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01783379570693055648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-4385953555067705302009-04-16T10:02:00.000-04:002009-04-16T10:02:00.000-04:00As always, I love reading your poems. Kind of lik...As always, I love reading your poems. Kind of like a window to the soul.T Rex Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07581711492269619311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-66023436277586145232009-04-16T09:59:00.000-04:002009-04-16T09:59:00.000-04:00You have this just right! Perfect. Don't you lov...You have this just right! Perfect. Don't you love when it just comes out?shabby girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03991126161405336712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-3194910447773661092009-04-16T09:54:00.000-04:002009-04-16T09:54:00.000-04:00I LOVE that. It's just beautiful.I LOVE that. It's just beautiful.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14369879546655984916noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-15123092492828924492009-04-16T09:45:00.000-04:002009-04-16T09:45:00.000-04:00This is just perfect... Though am not much of a po...This is just perfect... Though am not much of a poetry guy but i like these lines 'Juggling me<br />forty years of preparing<br />Turn around mama girl<br />a knowing you smiles.'Akumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00016334294585009034noreply@blogger.com