tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post262763472561497706..comments2023-10-30T09:31:00.839-04:00Comments on My Voice, My View: Another Flash Fiction Quickfireseptembermomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-50022448827434680152010-09-19T21:52:30.047-04:002010-09-19T21:52:30.047-04:00Are you expanding on any of these short fictions? ...Are you expanding on any of these short fictions? Because so many of them are really so luring. I would love to read some short stories from you, Kelly.Hyacynthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08838590548747956315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-49686896195219973482010-09-19T19:59:44.680-04:002010-09-19T19:59:44.680-04:00Fantastic!! You've started quite a story here....Fantastic!! You've started quite a story here...I'm ready for more :-)) ~Janine XOSniffles and Smileshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10073156486641622612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-39488408932287120902010-09-19T15:38:36.045-04:002010-09-19T15:38:36.045-04:00Wow, great job, Kelly!
Awesome and powerful descri...Wow, great job, Kelly!<br />Awesome and powerful descriptive style of writing in only one paragraph!<br />You're talented!<br /><br />Hope you're having a nice day!<br /><br />Big hugs,<br /><br />B xxBetty Manousoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08549686306725800208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-6142322130168895792010-09-19T15:04:58.733-04:002010-09-19T15:04:58.733-04:00That was definitely a great piece for you to work ...That was definitely a great piece for you to work with. And I love the name Zorah that you chose. She certainly does emanate serenity, doesn't she?Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07803503583347758969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-64830992019292632872010-09-19T14:43:44.883-04:002010-09-19T14:43:44.883-04:00wow Kelly. You really know how to connect words wi...wow Kelly. You really know how to connect words with the soul. I could see and feel it all. You are such a talented writer. i'm so glad that I get to read your stuff!!! have a beautiful sunday and awesome week!Jillienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08671844420400056149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-29603816046461923832010-09-19T01:04:49.592-04:002010-09-19T01:04:49.592-04:00Pretty impressive piece here Kelly "The fragi...Pretty impressive piece here Kelly "The fragile touch of her hand startled the quiet within me. I could not move away from those humble eyes" Many thanksRajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17658120584493661588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-30403126529647397992010-09-18T18:58:37.354-04:002010-09-18T18:58:37.354-04:00Hi Septembermom,
Another amazing short story...yo...Hi Septembermom,<br /><br />Another amazing short story...you capture so much in few words. Nicely written as always.The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-25537108697437275072010-09-18T09:28:43.339-04:002010-09-18T09:28:43.339-04:00I love the approach you took. Your words are so w...I love the approach you took. Your words are so wonderful to read. <br /><br />This is fun -- Let me give it a shot with a comical spin on it -- ;-) <br /><br />Hidden beneath these layered, colored cloths was the desire for Zorah to be a feminist. She carefully hid a black bra in hopes to burn it at her arranged marriage ceremony. Barefoot professor, not barefoot and pregnant was her secret desire.Mandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03345244543899178740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-9811240867036688392010-09-18T08:51:12.610-04:002010-09-18T08:51:12.610-04:00You show me things I never saw before with your wo...You show me things I never saw before with your words. Lovely Kelly. I love it over here at your place. And you are GOOD! :)Robyn Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17356555082768185840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-65660804572172949632010-09-18T04:40:41.697-04:002010-09-18T04:40:41.697-04:00Excellently written. The picture will be viewed wi...Excellently written. The picture will be viewed with new eyes through your words.Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-87044044885559259082010-09-18T03:28:45.020-04:002010-09-18T03:28:45.020-04:00You said so much with so little, and used your wor...You said so much with so little, and used your words very wisely with a depth of meaning. I loved the conflict of the past and the present - in both characters. Well done.<br /><br />Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.WordsPoeticallyWorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05932809387878012226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-63129621562540732842010-09-18T03:26:28.440-04:002010-09-18T03:26:28.440-04:00You get so much more out of the art then I ever co...You get so much more out of the art then I ever could. Thank you for bringing it to life. I love reading these. you are good.He & Me + 3https://www.blogger.com/profile/03692972824923390203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-19196753545247184112010-09-17T22:29:17.108-04:002010-09-17T22:29:17.108-04:00Nice to visit your poetry/writing world after a cr...Nice to visit your poetry/writing world after a crazy day. Thanks for the moment of peace.T Rex Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07581711492269619311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-54614533494946875382010-09-17T21:15:43.564-04:002010-09-17T21:15:43.564-04:00Love this. And to think that Zorah's peace ca...Love this. And to think that Zorah's peace came from something so traumatic. Definitely gets us thinking.Joannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972054718663959694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-70292918867575650982010-09-17T18:36:32.915-04:002010-09-17T18:36:32.915-04:00Awe-inspiring! Great job :O)Awe-inspiring! Great job :O)Dianehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07604687906788800639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-43182257371051340972010-09-17T18:02:07.127-04:002010-09-17T18:02:07.127-04:00Ooh, your good!Ooh, your good!Susan Fobeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10927064519907342393noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-80392371701847021652010-09-17T17:04:33.660-04:002010-09-17T17:04:33.660-04:00I think you did extrememly well, to write a piece ...I think you did extrememly well, to write a piece in 55 words about a painting certainly wons my admiration.<br /><br />Have a good week-end.<br />Yvonne.RHYTHM AND RHYMEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11386975261804630799noreply@blogger.com