tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post8366242829581394146..comments2023-10-30T09:31:00.839-04:00Comments on My Voice, My View: Poetry Quickfireseptembermomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-87012412042994435552009-10-29T11:38:57.898-04:002009-10-29T11:38:57.898-04:00Septembermom...what a great poem! So descriptive....Septembermom...what a great poem! So descriptive...I could feel the chill and see the frosted window panes...I love the imagery.<br /><br />DanDan Felsteadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04917775645881312007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-25864050396742716522009-10-28T21:01:53.132-04:002009-10-28T21:01:53.132-04:00Very well done ... and I like the repeating line a...Very well done ... and I like the repeating line at the end. I'm sure that is called something but I don't know what it is! I'm clapping for you!Jennershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08044537551139633301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-35304190680009273642009-10-28T10:55:17.309-04:002009-10-28T10:55:17.309-04:00That was so beautiful. I LOVED the refrain. Its s...That was so beautiful. I LOVED the refrain. Its so difficult to find the perfect set of words that are meaningful enough to repeat--You've done it. <br /><br />It ended with such hope for new life and beginning, but given that I lean more toward the gothic side I was expecting a desolate kind of ending....<br />Your ending is better.Jillienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08671844420400056149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-12392944376036312032009-10-28T09:45:38.194-04:002009-10-28T09:45:38.194-04:00Hey Septembermom! Thanks for visiting my sneaky i...Hey Septembermom! Thanks for visiting my sneaky interview. I wish I could get my little guy to nap at home, but that's almost impossible. So, yeah, it usually happens on the road between here and there.<br /><br />Loved your poem! You're so talented!Mitihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04193736084148703508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-87699847691287241362009-10-28T09:26:42.277-04:002009-10-28T09:26:42.277-04:00^ Of yours, I mean. This is the best yet.^ Of yours, I mean. This is the best yet.Janna Leadbetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06339705935553160673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-25719875732760268052009-10-28T09:26:19.594-04:002009-10-28T09:26:19.594-04:00Oh gosh, Kelly, I like this one better than those ...Oh gosh, Kelly, I like this one better than those I've seen. Beautiful!<br /><br />I'd be curious to see a sketch alongside it... ;)Janna Leadbetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06339705935553160673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-15114563608177220352009-10-28T04:47:23.219-04:002009-10-28T04:47:23.219-04:00I love the escalation of this Kelly...stare, pour,...I love the escalation of this Kelly...stare, pour, plunge, water October rain. To me this is you...observing the signs of your goals, taking chances, watering your own soil; your life. How often have we watched future pass us by without seizing the moment and making something of it?<br /><br />Good one, full of depth.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-16141380223262271612009-10-27T23:30:09.700-04:002009-10-27T23:30:09.700-04:00You are such a poet...I love to read your writing....You are such a poet...I love to read your writing. Your pen certainly catches fire : )The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-32821324906891559872009-10-27T22:27:12.899-04:002009-10-27T22:27:12.899-04:00What a perfect poem for October! It's a month ...What a perfect poem for October! It's a month of transition and you captured it so poetically perfect. "Warmth of home cannot hold me...". How true. Sustenance in the constant changing of the cold October Rain. Beautiful! Keep writing my friend, keep sharing. Blessings. Love and Light, Nina PNinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01603112009407252993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-15228077948885438162009-10-27T21:34:43.045-04:002009-10-27T21:34:43.045-04:00Ah, so very nice, Kelly. Nice indeed. It's del...Ah, so very nice, Kelly. Nice indeed. It's delicious, in fact. Sustenance is a great title.Judith Ellishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04593319882150923231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-80092565143254789882009-10-27T21:21:12.226-04:002009-10-27T21:21:12.226-04:00October is one of my favorite months of the year.....October is one of my favorite months of the year...you described October to a T.H.K.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10555156176113515138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-90620428339013376632009-10-27T21:17:42.341-04:002009-10-27T21:17:42.341-04:00This poem certainly fits my mood this evening-tire...This poem certainly fits my mood this evening-tired and crabby (and the rain doesn't help.)Susan Fobeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10927064519907342393noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-91740886836067918412009-10-27T21:13:23.125-04:002009-10-27T21:13:23.125-04:00I hate October rain...burrrr! Great poemI hate October rain...burrrr! Great poemHe & Me + 3https://www.blogger.com/profile/03692972824923390203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-50493945071439490262009-10-27T20:23:33.905-04:002009-10-27T20:23:33.905-04:00Wonderful poem! I love the verse with "warmt...Wonderful poem! I love the verse with "warmth of home cannot hold me..."Floryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01953880218222761505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-47728765454836799352009-10-27T20:02:39.282-04:002009-10-27T20:02:39.282-04:00Once again, I applaud you. I like it.Once again, I applaud you. I like it.Corrie Howehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02107352260276921770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-21016984870251531992009-10-27T18:06:29.639-04:002009-10-27T18:06:29.639-04:00I am so with you and your cold October rain.I am so with you and your cold October rain.Beth Kepharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14236487532413398431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-12914043685769554202009-10-27T17:39:20.306-04:002009-10-27T17:39:20.306-04:00Great poem. Actually made me feel a little of tha...Great poem. Actually made me feel a little of that October chill here in the desert ;-)Gerrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04527496985856499901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-78990606672646823632009-10-27T16:15:50.954-04:002009-10-27T16:15:50.954-04:00All of a sudden I felt a chill come over me as I r...All of a sudden I felt a chill come over me as I read your poem. Enjoyed!Aletahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05605214202876973830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-4329508182500469382009-10-27T15:30:08.105-04:002009-10-27T15:30:08.105-04:00Awesome October poem!Awesome October poem!T Rex Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07581711492269619311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-24634566540894617712009-10-27T15:12:44.302-04:002009-10-27T15:12:44.302-04:00This was a perfect poem for my day too! It's ...This was a perfect poem for my day too! It's snowing and raining here today,on and off. The clouds are that beautiful black-gray, that are more striking than dull light gray. Loved it, Kelly.Randihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16746936407430428943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-34151836977537860792009-10-27T15:03:44.849-04:002009-10-27T15:03:44.849-04:00This is my day in a nutshell.This is my day in a nutshell.kisatrtlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831014017505568022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-20312361163672602572009-10-27T13:49:21.142-04:002009-10-27T13:49:21.142-04:00What a perfect day for these thoughts, it's ju...What a perfect day for these thoughts, it's just as you describe. That cold rain is transporting, isn't it.Joannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972054718663959694noreply@blogger.com