tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post2936700689188878089..comments2023-10-30T09:31:00.839-04:00Comments on My Voice, My View: One of my poetry quickfiresseptembermomhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-85089637834265914942009-09-23T08:11:51.821-04:002009-09-23T08:11:51.821-04:00Identity of self, an existence undefined often for...Identity of self, an existence undefined often forgotten; begging to be named but life's challenges and responsibilities forces one to ignore themselves until the desired, defining momentum arrives to shape and mold. In the interim, the soul feels out of sync, like a puzzle piece that doesn't fit with the rest of the world. Interesting analogy of a sketch in respect to purpose, self-conception.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-10092655094425520682009-09-23T08:10:41.963-04:002009-09-23T08:10:41.963-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-38423569627925736302009-09-22T22:36:32.834-04:002009-09-22T22:36:32.834-04:00Lovely! Simply lovely. I can't believe you w...Lovely! Simply lovely. I can't believe you wrote that during elmo! During elmo, I just retreat into a dark, quiet place and drift... Anything to avoid that voice!Caitlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581232345782115891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-57628463904202836242009-09-22T22:27:03.513-04:002009-09-22T22:27:03.513-04:00Nicely done in only 5 minutes!! That is impressiv...Nicely done in only 5 minutes!! That is impressive. You paint a picture of your self and state of mind in so few words.The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-61063294193643775242009-09-22T21:38:18.428-04:002009-09-22T21:38:18.428-04:00"Scratched up composition
begs to be named.&q..."Scratched up composition<br />begs to be named." <br /><br />I like this line. And the last. "floats around, waiting for the right net."<br /><br />I liked the use of strong verbs and picturesque comparisons.Donhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17070578562535678950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-24933056405318488352009-09-22T21:00:41.509-04:002009-09-22T21:00:41.509-04:00i'm sorry i can't remember but were you th...i'm sorry i can't remember but were you the one i won the trix package from?Antoinette Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11819760579858953608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-33282403127920320482009-09-22T12:41:10.967-04:002009-09-22T12:41:10.967-04:00Wow--you got me. Awesome.Wow--you got me. Awesome.Gerrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15355005063119095095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-1348761561061846782009-09-22T10:54:25.292-04:002009-09-22T10:54:25.292-04:00This made me kind of sad. The crumpled up picture ...This made me kind of sad. The crumpled up picture in the corner. You evoke such emotion with your poetry. It's a true gift!Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01564542013071462911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-4272089408582797852009-09-22T02:03:11.784-04:002009-09-22T02:03:11.784-04:00I can only imagine what you would write with more ...I can only imagine what you would write with more time given! Nice piece of work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-39604736969070943222009-09-21T23:16:52.546-04:002009-09-21T23:16:52.546-04:00Ooohh....VERY nice.
;^)Ooohh....VERY nice.<br />;^)Cynthia L. H.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13626090956828108370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-41009981563665777352009-09-21T21:38:53.507-04:002009-09-21T21:38:53.507-04:00I think you just described my life. Nice way to s...I think you just described my life. Nice way to spend five minutes!Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07803503583347758969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-22632611204802197752009-09-21T20:16:47.119-04:002009-09-21T20:16:47.119-04:00I love reading your poetry; thank you for sharing ...I love reading your poetry; thank you for sharing it!Hyacynthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08838590548747956315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-21312703123883973302009-09-21T19:53:52.137-04:002009-09-21T19:53:52.137-04:00I love the part about the indefinite floating, wai...I love the part about the indefinite floating, waiting for the right net. Like Teri said, you can interpret this differently with each reading, which makes for such a thought provoking piece.Joannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972054718663959694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-23510045678807889792009-09-21T19:46:01.978-04:002009-09-21T19:46:01.978-04:00I like it! Sometimes I think the best stuff comes ...I like it! Sometimes I think the best stuff comes when we don't think too much about it!Jennershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08044537551139633301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-11941874327443253902009-09-21T19:26:07.414-04:002009-09-21T19:26:07.414-04:00This is a very good poem. Sometimes our best writ...This is a very good poem. Sometimes our best writing comes out when we are not giving it much thought. I love this verse: "Scratched up composition begs to be named." Write on!Floryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01953880218222761505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-48599837112139245502009-09-21T17:54:33.942-04:002009-09-21T17:54:33.942-04:00How do you do that? Love it. I think this poem c...How do you do that? Love it. I think this poem could be read over and over with slightly different interpretations each time.Terihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01722162542135510165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-2314228431024013272009-09-21T17:38:59.758-04:002009-09-21T17:38:59.758-04:00Some days are pencil me days while others are pai...Some days are pencil me days while others are painted with oils. Your poetry is heartfelt and spirit lifted. Your soul may seem as if crumbled and swept aside, yet your words speak different. You've captured yourself if only for a moment. Your net is not empty but filled with a multitude of talent and soul. So multi-task dear September mom , take notes and pencil you in, if only for a moment. Your composition will dry and it's Masters hand will autograph the corner. Your net has come, so pencil away and grace our eyes, our minds, our souls with your words. We won't mind the dust. Love and Light, Nina P.Ninahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01603112009407252993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-61762881655085442952009-09-21T16:00:32.561-04:002009-09-21T16:00:32.561-04:00really enjoyed this one.....really enjoyed this one.....Wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11253333741636488581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-40791930309592612302009-09-21T15:09:03.352-04:002009-09-21T15:09:03.352-04:00oh i think its amazing the beauty is that it says ...oh i think its amazing the beauty is that it says a lot "begs to be named" i loved this line!!Naqveehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17815073544766423243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-319802899399563612009-09-21T14:27:24.156-04:002009-09-21T14:27:24.156-04:00Thanks for visiting my blog!
You sound like a bus...Thanks for visiting my blog!<br /><br />You sound like a busy mom. Impressive that you're able to write poetry in the few free minutes you have!Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11448862711611748427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-45497053486142065212009-09-21T14:05:19.343-04:002009-09-21T14:05:19.343-04:00Ewww, You are good. I am so not a poet or an arti...Ewww, You are good. I am so not a poet or an artist and am so jealous of people that can write and draw.He & Me + 3https://www.blogger.com/profile/03692972824923390203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-92041679815471567712009-09-21T13:39:09.530-04:002009-09-21T13:39:09.530-04:00What a beautiful piece. And way to multi-task! You...What a beautiful piece. And way to multi-task! You go girl!!Monica Manninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15261586665831377609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-66995450933174305562009-09-21T13:02:22.793-04:002009-09-21T13:02:22.793-04:00Very nice, Kelly. The process of life and that of ...Very nice, Kelly. The process of life and that of writing are deeply felt, the indescribable need to express oneself and the opaqueness that belies it. Please write more.Judith Ellishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04593319882150923231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-49990298018044028592009-09-21T13:01:19.405-04:002009-09-21T13:01:19.405-04:00This is wonderful! I know this feeling. I often ...This is wonderful! I know this feeling. I often felt this way when my children were small. As a mom you give so much...something has to give to get it all done and often it is that piece of our self that gets tossed in to the corner. <br />Now mine are grown and I find that I am dusting off the once crumpled self and discovering the me that was ignored for far too long.<br /><br />Thank you for this. It was lovely!<br /><br />Have a Beautiful Day!TheChicGeekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10781656678543589662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7911067505461648404.post-84347218584031921822009-09-21T12:48:15.834-04:002009-09-21T12:48:15.834-04:00its wonderful.its wonderful.Jillienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08671844420400056149noreply@blogger.com