Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Poetry Quickfire & Miss Lily

Shaking off the rust as I try my hand at throwing some words together in five minutes...

I like to see what erupts as I push through each line quickly.

Mirror

A phantom of a tremble
could betray that hesitation
to accept and dare
her eyes to celebrate
that "off" image pushing
through the pane
with a fire of being.


As you can see, Lily is enjoying her recuperation time on the couch.  Only a few weeks left of this recovery period and then Lily will be literally off and running!

Hoping to visit you tonight between bites of my huge chocolate chip cookie!!

8 comments:

Gerri said...

Glad to hear she's mending!

Teresha Freckleton-Petite said...

your poetry is a phoenix rising! cute pic of Lily-Boo!

T Rex Mom said...

Yeah for the poem!

Yeah that Lily is doing so well. She needs the doggie equivalent of a giant chocolate chip cookie.

Randi said...

You always amaze me, the way you can spend 5 minutes to create a work of literary art! That's a beautiful talent you have, my friend. :)

Kim said...

You've still got it my friend!

Dani said...

It's been forever since I've gone blog surfing. Good to see you are still active on your blog. Love your writing, as always. :) I've started up a new blog too. The Daily Drop has sort of fallen out of use, but I've been writing more at LiveLoveLearnandRepeat if you want to hop on over. It's a lot more introspective and deep and religious...I wish I had a better sense of humor like some of these other awesome bloggers on here that never fail to make me laugh. But I am what I am. :) Good to see ya! -Dani

Jillien Minera said...

great writing as always. amazing what you can write in just 5 minutes :)

BECKY said...

Oh, she is beautiful and sweet!