Monday, August 16, 2010

Microfiction Monday

It's Microfiction Monday over at stony river. We are invited to write a story in 140 characters or less (including spaces and punctuation) to accompany a select photo.

She quickly ran to the door to get a peek at her blind date. “He said that he was shy, but this is ridiculous. Oh well, he’s breathing.”

Happy Monday everyone!

32 comments:

Paul C said...

Well done. He looks dashing and gallant.

Diane said...

At least she tried to look on the bright side.... :O)

SparkleFarkle said...

I say, GET THE CAN OPENER, HONEY!

LOL! SparkleFarkle~~~~~*

Sylvia K said...

Yep, good attitude, now get the can opener and have a great date! Fun take for the day! Enjoy your week!

Sylvia

John's comments said...

Some days breathing or having a pulse will do! My 140 is here

Creativity!! said...

A Different Idea To Enjoy A Date!!!!!! Marvellous Idea :) :)

Flory said...

Optimistic view, I say. LOL!!!

glnroz said...

he aint blind,, he is just "peeking"... that was a good twist.

Caitlin said...

Ha! Very cute! Glad I'M not going on that date! :)

T Rex Mom said...

I love it! Sounds like a few guys I dated!

SouthLakesMom said...

Breathing is good. Sharing a horse with him to the movies is not.

Michael G-G said...

A very shy guy, indeed. Good one!

Have a good week.

hope said...

At least he showed up...looking interesting. :)

welcome to my world of poetry said...

I loved this, well done.

Yvonne.

Jenners said...

Ha! Loved this. Didn't expect that! And I bet he has a chastity belt too!

sylviamorice said...

How could she really be certain that he was breathing--could she see the armor rising up and down??? LOL. Good one this week.

Susan Fobes said...

Breathing? Are you sure? LOL!

Michelle said...

I love it! what an optimistic view of life :)

Teresha@Marlie and Me said...

LOL! She saw the silver lining in her knight in shining armor

Pat said...

LOL--"At least he's breathing." Poor girl--she must be desperate.

Mandy's Life After 30 said...

Thanks for making me laugh out loud today! That was a good one Kelly~! I think you'd make a great greeting card writer, by the way~!

The Write Girl said...

This is a fun story...so creative and sweet. I really enjoy reading your Microfiction Monday post. Nicely done here :)

Valerie said...

A hard man to understand, I should think

Gerri said...

Hahaha! That was awesome. :)

Angela said...

Very creative! This made me smile. :) I'm glad to be back, thanks!

Robyn Campbell said...

Kelly, I love your poem. GENUIS, my friend. Made me laugh so hard. Glad he was at least breathing. Love it. :)

Wendy said...

very cute!

Herb of Grace said...

Took me a couple seconds... But I got it! LOL!!!

Deborah said...

Made me laugh aloud ... brilliant!!! :o)

Nessa said...

That was wonderful. And he is a Knight. That's good too.

Gerri said...

Loved it!

Randi said...

You certainly have a talent for this! Very cute!