As always I love to read your words.
You truly have poetic grace...love to read your words Septembermom : )
Lovely, Kelly. Simply lovely.
Lyrical. Sublime. Deep. Another wonderful poem!
Wonderful. Now give us some insight....I love having poems explained!
The line that does it for me is "Engage the real." Oh so true, in so many ways in life. Beautiful.
Communion, intimacy, honesty, vulnerability, relationship - these are words that came to my mind when I read this. WB
Another's RebuttalShe thought I spoke empty flatteries --mistaking my sincerest compliments.Looking closer, quieter,I discovered a glass wall...(easily, gently shattered)Looking closer, quieter,(as the One allowed)I peeled the paper armor...Real intimacy restored.
Woww :) :) Beautiful Lines Dear :) :) Enjoyed & Pleasure Read :) :)
This is short but extremely powerful!btw: Thank your for your kind comments. I hope you consider doing music regularly too-I really enjoy your choices...
Love your poems! I thought of a busy couple in need of some quiet time together. I love these lines, "distance can trick even the most intimate..."
You get better each week!
Love it. So peaceful, then so deep. Nicely done, Kelly!
Any particular fabric print you would like your purse make out of? (solid, Christmas, flowers, plaid, etc.) I'm going fabric shopping this weekend. Let me know. And congratulations on winning the giveaway. Give me a few weeks to get it done.
This might be your best one yet.
Beautiful. So calm, so quiet. :)
Such an elegant dance of poetic thought expressing impassioned desire in vulnerability.
Truly beautiful. You are so talented.
Wow, I'm a bit speechless at the quiet hum of your words :) Now I'm going to have to stick around a bit and read some more! Thanks for your sweet comment at Sneaky Momma's on my interview!
Wow that was deep, but very very good. You are way too good at this.
Every word a gem . . once again. Deeply poetical and clever, so very clever!!Thanks so much for the lovely comments you left for me during my absence. It was so very good to see that so many of you, my lovelies had come by to visit. A fun-filled Friday to You!!
Thank you for sharing the beauty of words to start my day... you warmed the heart!
Such flowing words :)I thought I'd mention a blog that I've begun for all of the writer's out here in blogland. Missing Pictures, Poetry and Prose...I had to do something to encourage our writer's and photographers to come together again.You can visit at Write With Pictures
For some reason it really struck me when you referred to the glass within. Sometimes I feel like my heart is made of glass. Very powerful, Kelly.
Oh, love it for sure! So intimate and real :)
I love that.... paper armor. Just right.
Oh this is so good; real. I especially love the first stanza!"Slide self closerand quiet our wordsto hear the soft breakof the glass within."
I like the last stanza. Beautifully written. I also applaud you for raising 4 kids! I have two and am pretty busy with that. Found you through Susan's blog.
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